This is a funny picture. I could see Heather doing this to anyone, not just Zoey.
To begin, the art is very well put together. The background is awesome. You did a great job on drawing the two females. Their outfits, anatomy, and personalities look as though this was an episode or a coming up episode.
Next, the shading is wonderful. I love that you went into detail with the background. It's not too detailed but it is like the show. Yes I do keep comparing this piece with the show because they are so similar.
That is awesome that you have the ability to make a piece of art that looks like it came from the show. Keep it up with the amazing art that you can make. I would love to write more critiques.
ok it starts by zoey leaving her caving (the camp house thingy)and i come in sneaky and she forgets the flower on her hair and when she comes back she sees me with her purple underwear and ill be like "hey there"...........if is too much ill think another suggestion, if is funny well i dont know :/